请大家指点一下。。

请大家指点一下。。 以下是回盘。，，请大家指点一下。。小弟感激不尽。。


Dear Mr Magnus,

Good day for you!

Thanks for you inquiry.At present,we don't produce ball pen.

We manufacture calendar, book light, calculator, HUB, mouse and other computer accessory, FM radio and other electronic gift items. Should there be any of interesting you have, or any of items being of interest you, please feel free to contact me, we are pleased to offer our help to you.



In addition, we have exported much products to America and Europe, From Oct to Dec, about 28*20GP products exported to Europe, and there are 11*20GP to get to Sweden among them.So we're sure they must be hot product in your market.



We are looking forward to doing business with you in the near future if possible!


Best Wishes,

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他们说他们不需要钢笔，但他们生产日历，阅读灯，计算器，集线器，鼠标和其他电脑配件， FM收音机及其他电子礼品。
有兴趣可以和他们联系

然后他说他们的产品在欧美，瑞典都很受欢迎，出口量很大。
所以，他认为他们的产品在你们的市场上应该也会很受欢迎。
回复 #2 sally-sun 的帖子 不是啦。。这个是我给客人发的。。希望大家指点一下。。


比我强多了

文化人啊
look forward to 后面跟动名词
if possible 最好不要了吧，怪怪的
Although we don't manufactore ball pen right now, we  manufactory  calendar, book light, calculator......
多谢SALLY-SUN的指点。。。想问大家，，如果你作为客户，看了这个邮件，什么想法、、、
我看得懂, 不知道客戶懂不懂,不過要是我就這樣寫
Dear Mr Magnus,
Good day for you!
Thanks for your inquiry. It’s our Horner to do business with you but unfortunately we do not make ball pen at present.
We only manufacture calendar, book light, calculator, HUB, mouse and other computer accessory, FM radio and other electronic gift items. We have been doing lots of business with USA and European countries, so please feel free to contact me if you are interested in our products, we will be very glad to enter a business relationship with you.
By the way, I wish I could help you if you have difficult to find a quality ball pen supplier.

Best Wishes,
回复 #9 Tod.yo 的帖子 多谢TOD-YO的指点。。。

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